First prompt story ever
Fic prompt: Lucifer is kidnapped. When the LAPD finally find him he is barely concious and pinned to the wall of a forgotten warehouse like a butterfly, blood pooling beneath his feat. They think the wings spread behind him are part of the kidnappers twisted sense of humour. They are not.
Free the Devil from pain
Erstellt: 02.12.2017
Letzte Änderung: 27.01.2018
Letzte Änderung: 27.01.2018
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2598 Wörter, 1 Kapitel
2598 Wörter, 1 Kapitel
Hauptcharaktere: Lucifer Morningstar, Chloe Jane Decker
Unterthemen: Lucifer
Trigger-Warnungen: Gewalt
Kapitel | Datum | Andere Formate | Daten |
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Kapitel 1 Kapitel 1 | E: 02.12.2017 U: 27.01.2018 |
Kommentare (1) 2598 Wörter abgeschlossen |
Nice story. I like it very well. You show Chloe's feelings very good and describe the setting in a good manner. Your writing style is very good.
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Kommentar zu: Kapitel 1:
Antwort von: Alucard
22.05.2018 11:53
Danke, freut mich wenn es dir gefällt :)